Sappho
6.
(Fr. 31)
He
seems to me to be equal to the gods,
that
man who sits across from you
and
listens close and hand
to
your sweet voice
and
lovely laughter. Truly it sets
my
heart to pounding in my breast,
for
the moment I glance at you, I can
no
longer speak;
my
tongue grows numb; at once a subtle
fire
runs stealthily beneath my skin;
my
eyes see nothing, my ears
ring
and buzz,
the
sweat pours down, a trembling
seizes
the whole of me, I turn paler
than
grass, and I seem to myself
not
far from dying.
But
everything can be endured, because…
Carson
claims that Sappho’s lyrics have two different
sides of love; sweet and bitter. Carson says that love starts with happy and
sweet feeling, but “most love ends badly” (Carson 4). In the beginning of the fragment,
Sappho uses words such as “sweet voice, lovely laughter, and pounding heart”.
She describes positive and bright side of love in first two paragraphs.
However, she begins to use words such as “numb, paler, and dying” in next two
paragraphs. The last two paragraphs depict sad and dark side of love, and they foreshadow
that love will eventually end up badly. In Sappho’s lyrics, she uses
“Sweetbitter eros” to give dynamic transition from positive to negative
emotion.
Theognis
26.
(Lines 1353-56)
Bitter
and sweet, alluring and tormenting:
Such,
till it be fulfilled, Kyrnos, is love to the young
for
if one finds fulfillment, it proves sweet; but if,
pursuing,
one
fails of fulfillment, then of all things it is most painful.
Carson’s
bittersweet idea can be applied to Theognis’s lyrics. Theognis also indicates
two different sides of love. He states words that have opposite meanings such
as “Bitter and sweet, alluring and tormenting” in the first sentence. This
sentence represents love has positive and negative sides. It seems like love
has positive and negative sides evenly. However, the following sentences
emphasize more on “failure of love” than “pursuit of love”. He says, “if one
finds fulfillment, it proves sweet”. Pursuit of love will give a sweet feeling
of love. But to the contrary, failure of love will give the
most painful. He uses a superlative word to highlight that failure of love is the
worst thing. Like Sappho, Theognis also uses “Sweetbitter eros” to offer
dynamic paradox, and he emphasizes that bitter side of love is stronger than
sweet side.
Overall this is pretty thorough. Watch your citations - the poem you use should have parenthetical citation at the end. You get a lot out of the paradoxical sweetbitter of eros that Carson describes; would you be able to find a good passage from her to characterize that? Further, what else does Carson say about eros? The Sappho you examine is a key example of eros and the magnifying power of distance/mediation, and is worth spending time thinking about. Your attention to Theognis is great. My question is, does the last line attempt to resolve the paradox? What does the phrase "fails of fulfillment" do here?
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