Sebastian Corrochano: Composed upon Westminster Bridge by William Wordsworth
Earth has not anything to show more fair:
Dull would he be of soul who could pass by
A sight so touching in its majesty:
This City now doth, like a garment, wear
The beauty of the morning; silent, bare,
Ships, towers, domes, theatres, and temples lie
Open unto the fields, and to the sky;
All bright and glittering in the smokeless air.
Never did sun more beautifully steep
In his first splendour, valley, rock, or hill;
Ne'er saw I, never felt, a calm so deep!
The river glideth at his own sweet will:
Dear God! the very houses seem asleep;
And all that mighty heart is lying still!
Archilochus
But if you are in pressing haste and desire drives you on,
there is in our household
one who now longs greatly...
a lovely tender maiden. She had, I think,
a beauty that is faultless.
She is the one whom you should make your own.
So much she said, and to her I replied:
"Daughter of Amphimedo,
that nobel and wise
woman whom the mouldering earth now holds below,
the goddess offers pleasures
of many sorts to young men
When you first look at these two
poems, they appear to be vastly different. One is talking about a
structure in a city and the other is talking about a woman. On the
one side, you have William Wordsworth talking about the majesty and
splendor of the Westminster Bridge. On the other, you have
Archilochus talking about a lovely tender maiden with a faultless
beauty. Overall though, both are really talking about beauty and how
they perceive something as beautiful. Both are stricken with
adoration, one with an incredible structure, the other with a pretty
woman.
Composed upon Westminster bridge
is about someone describing the most beautiful thing they have ever
seen, the Westminster bridge on a clear, quiet morning. The
peacefulness of the quiet morning and the clear air are unusual in a
city that usually has much fog. The views of the countryside, the
sky, and all the major landmarks in London add to the serenity. It
possesses a calmness that the speaker has never felt, not even in the
open countryside. This is surprising, since he is in the middle of a
city that is usually very loud and bustling with activity.
The excerpt from Archilochus is
about a woman who is very beautiful. The woman is so beautiful that
she is someone worthy of being married, simply because of her beauty.
The way he describes her is very sexual. The only things that seem
to matter about her are her looks and how she can give men pleasures
with the help of the goddess Amphimedo. He describes her as a tender
young maiden. This is most likely a reference to her breasts and
the way he would fondle her during sex, since uses similar terms
later on when he describes having sex with a young woman.
I think you did well getting into the "ambience" of each poem, but I wonder if the analysis would be aided by getting into particular aspects of the language? Unpack a metaphor from each to see what further things can be said. Some other things to note - Archilochus is recounting a dialogue that should be represented in the analysis, especially since the seduction takes place there, while Wordsworth is writing a 'loco-descriptive' poem reproducing his thoughts on seeing a particular place.
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