Excerpt from Adele’s “Someone Like You”
“I hate to turn up
out of the blue uninvited.
But I couldn't stay away; I couldn't fight it.
I had hoped you'd see my face and that you'd be reminded
that for me it isn't over.”
But I couldn't stay away; I couldn't fight it.
I had hoped you'd see my face and that you'd be reminded
that for me it isn't over.”
Excerpt from Archilochus
35. (Fr. 191)
“For such was the passion of love that coiled itself beneath my heart and
poured thick mist across my eyes, robbing me of my tender senses.”
The
excerpt from Adele’s song called “Someone Like You” shows a devastated situation
of a broken-hearted woman. When the author says “out of the blue uninvited” and
repeats the phrase “couldn’t”, she describes the inevitable sadness caused by
the separation with her lover. In addition, Adele writes, “I had hoped you’d
see my face and that you’d be reminded that for me it isn’t over” to emphasize
that she is not able to move on because her heart still stays with him.
The excerpt from Archilochus
(Fr.191) describes a sorrowful state of a betrayed man. He writes, “For such
was the passion of love that coiled itself beneath my heart” to express his
genuine feelings towards his lover that had settled in his mind. Then, Archilochus
was able to underline his sadness through mentioning his tears by saying he “poured
thick mist across my eyes, robbing me of my tender sense.”
Even though Archilochus and
Adele lived in such different time periods, some similarities and differences
could be found between these two artists in terms of lyric poetry. Like the
majority of modern day lyrics, Adele uses rhyming pattern for the first two
lines of the excerpt. However, Archilochus uses a type of iambic style called
“epodic” verse, which uses various lengths of iambic and dactylic meter.
Although the structure and the poetry writing tactics might vary from each
other, the general messages that these excerpts try to deliver are almost
identical. Both Archilochus and Adele are heartbroken from the people that they
once called lovers. Adele’s “uninvited blue”, which she could not help to “stay
away” or “fight” can be compared to Archilochus’ inability to control his
sorrow that his tear drops would fall across his eyes. Also, Adele wishing her
love to be “reminded that for me it isn’t over” can be addressed to
Archilochus’ “passion of love that coiled itself beneath his heart” because the
emotions of these two poets still remain that the broken hearts still prolong.
I liked some of your attention to word choice in in Adele, as that sort of structure "I couldn't stay away, I couldn't fight it" is an important rhetorical move you'll see in the lyric poets as well. Now, I think you drew some important parallels but also think about Archilochus' verse as being also about the nature of erotic passion - "thick mist" is blinding, and his "tender senses" are robbed. What might it mean to lose one's senses in this way?
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