Victory
odes are the type of Greek poetry that praises and emphasize the victors of specific
types of Olympic Games relating to the Gods and well known Heroes of the time.
The poems are written so that it is remembered and because humans are mortal and
must be aware of death at any time as Bacchylides argued “a man should speak of
what he really means to accomplish” through victory odes it would become
immortal of victor’s achievement.
Most
victory odes begins with the victor’s name, his family, place of born and the
event. For instance, Bacchylides both Ode2 and Ode 3 starts “for Argeoios son
of Pantheidas, from Keos, victor in boys’ boxing at the Isthmian games” and “for
Hieron son of Deinomenes, from Syracuse, victor in the chariot race at the
Olympic games.” Also, poets never forget to mention muses, Gods and other well-known
heroes to enlarge its honor and to spread the story to people. For example in
Ode 13 of Bacchylides, he has compared Pytheas to “crushing is the hand that
Perseus’ descendant wields against the savage lion’s neck with stratagems of
every kind.” Because Pytheas is a victor in the pankration that is derived from
Perseus’ heroic moment and by comparing its achievement greatly develops honor
for Pytheas. In addition, Bacchylides claimed in Ode 5 to Hieron that “you will
know how to judge the violet-crowned Muses’ sweet gift and ornament” referring his
own poet as a gift from the Muses to emphasize that the victor is graced with
honor, also saying that “make Zeus the son of Kronos your theme of song……bearing
for Hieron the leaves of happiness.”
Another
role that victory odes hold is establishing the idea of mortality of human
being. In Ode 5 Bacchylides compared human life to the leaves that are falling
from the tree as “there he observed the souls of wretched mortals by Kokytos’
streams, like leaves tossed by the wind up and down.” The reason why he took an
idea that human beings are mortal essentially is to emphasize the importance of
the victory odes and accomplishment that one should achieve. For example, in
Ode 5 he says that because “for no mortal on earth is born to be in all ways
fortunate,” “a man should speak of what he really means to accomplish,” as “Victory
have caused golden fame to flourish in the sight of many for a few men
throughout their lifetimes.” He indicates that people should be aware of death
at any time and if one wants immortality it is done by their accomplishment
written out in poems as he claimes that “when death’s dark cloud conceals them,
there remains renown undying for a thing well done as their unfailing portion.”
The introduction is awkward - the sentences run on and introduce quotations where more remarks are needed first. You also need to cite your passages with the proper formatting as poetry - pay attention to line breaks. Spend time analyzing each passage, especially the complicated ones. Don't use them as examples of something pre-given, show how under analysis they illustrate a deeper theme. You frequently cite upwards of three passages at a time. Slow down. I want to see the analysis get more precise before you move that fast.
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